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I took about ten minutes to fix this image up a little bit. I tried my best to work on everything people commented on that I agreed with. The main thing I fixed was the formed ball of energy. Worked a little more with the shading and tried my best to fix the fingers. Hope this looks better than the last one. ^^; Enjoy.
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Ayla
Ayla
I took about ten minutes to fix this image up a little bit. I tried my best to work on everything people commented on that I agreed with. The main thing I fixed was the formed ball of energy. Worked a little more with the shading and tried my best to fix the fingers. Hope this looks better than the last one. ^^; Enjoy.
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Ayla 2004-12-08 05:39:57 oh and aikuza, the reason i didn't work on the boots was because i thought about what i imagined her like with her robe and i pictured them plain.. hope it still works ok this way. ()
Kheine 2004-12-08 08:17:16 Looks great! Me like it dude ^^ ()
Deetris 2004-12-08 08:34:01 Yup looks mutch better ^^. I did already say what I wanted to say in your first poste ;) ()
paper-samurai 2004-12-08 09:26:55 kaameehaameeeehaaaaaaa!!! ()
Ayla 2004-12-08 11:28:11 thanks guys. ^^ glad it looks better. chwan-fow: lmao. ive been waiting for someone to say something like that. XD thank you for that comment. ()
Deetris 2004-12-08 13:35:15 no chwan-fow I'ts a spirit bomb :P ()
ukkie 2004-12-08 19:57:11 yup, looks better! (though I didn't comment on the previous one I think, shame on me!) Well I like her expression and her overall design, she has beautiful hair and a very nice outfit ^_^ Keep it up! ()
Ayla 2004-12-08 20:49:05 deetris: thats exactly what i was thinking when i finished with this pose and decided on an energy ball. ^^;; good thing i didnt do those lines of light moving into the ball of energy or else if wouldve really looked like a spirit bomb. =P ukkie: yes shame on you. no just kidding but im glad you think it looks better. i liked her facial expression a lot when i was finished with it. half the reason i put the image of her for the background. ^^ ()
nightwind 2004-12-08 22:33:57 Hands look a bit weird but I love the come out!! ()
AIKUZA 2004-12-08 22:47:37 It looks better indeed. but still I'm not satisfied with the boots :P. And I hope you don;t mind for telling this, but her kneecaps aren't teh same height, even in that view it looks odd. Like the right leg from our POV is longer. But don't mention that. Further more..... it looks great! I see quite some improvements since you joined MWS :) ()
ukkie 2004-12-09 21:00:31 you know, now that I look at this picture again I noticed something: the thumb of her left (from our POV) hand is at the wrong place ^_^' It should be on the back, not on the front! ^_^ that's probably why nightwind and roefken think that hand looks a bit off ^_^ ()
Ayla 2004-12-09 23:51:11 ukkie: actually.. ^^;; its not that. i picked that up its just with the perspective of the hand.. and since i suck at hands.. the pinky looks like a thumb... ^^;;;;;; roefken and nightwind: yeah.. im gonna practice hands a little more.. ^^; aikuza: sorry to disappoint you on the boots. and you did catch the thing with the kneecaps.. even i didnt notice that while i was working on this pick. bah, shoulda had you work the progress. =P thanks so much for that comment though aikuza!! ^^ ()
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