
| Artist | Description |
gothqueen |
A bit of character design. I like the fact that the lineart is pretty neat and I like her 'natural' proportions (not too skinny or too long legs, a normal, voluptuous woman). I don't like her face andthe hair is a bit weird. Tell me what you guys think. |
| Def Character | 2006-09-06 13:18:57 | Yup the lineart is realy clean^^ but you scanned a hair to :p I am glad to see someone daring to draw natural proportions cause most fem are that way The anatomy is just a tiny bit of. Don't hesitate to use reference... in time you will figure out what goes where... The neck is realy thick. The shiney bit are nice but the light comes from all sides... The over all idea is daring and if you get the anatomy right it will look great... keep it up! () |
| ukkie | 2006-09-07 16:20:25 | Indeed good lineart ^_^ I like the highlights! I think the body looks great, but the head is off. The neck is too thick, her eye is too far to the right (from our pov) and her mouth should be higher. Maybe use some reference for the knife next time? Because it looks a little corny like this ^_~ But like I said, the body is great ^_^ So what's the design for? :) () |
| lady_yuna | 2006-09-09 01:24:36 | Like you heard, the anatomy is off, but with improvement you could be great. ^_^ () |
