
| Artist | Description |
Yadiel |
This time I uploaded just the sketch of the new page, this way any change will be easy to do, I'll do the inking on Saturday, I use to correct some pencil errors when I do the inking, like the sword in panel 4 (I forgot it was covered) and the ropes of panel 5, I forgot them 2. This is just the sketch so speed lines in 1 and 4 are missing, but I would like to hear your opinion, is there any other change necesary. Oh about panel 5, I used that expresion mostly because I want to show that they are wordless because the weapons actually did what Kernel ask for, and they don't really know what fear is.(trying to think as a kid) All your comments will help me a lot. thx |
| Yadiel | 2007-01-11 23:21:35 | ...guess it will be really hard to understand without the dialogs. panel 6 Kernel is exited because the weapons moved. Some unknown voice says that that was dangerous. panel 7 Mina is looking who talked. () |
| Def Character | 2007-01-12 03:20:30 | Yadiel I comment later cuz I have some work to do now...but I do have comments ^^ () |
| Def Character | 2007-01-12 07:26:48 | Oy Yadiel I posted this page in the Art in progress section of the forum to. You can find my reaction there ^^ http://mangaworkshop.net/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=717 () |
